Simmons”Drood’ a boring disappointment

  Let me start out by saying that I'm a big, big fan of the novels by Dan Simmons and have been for more than a decade. I think his last book, "The Terror," was one of the finest horror/historical novels ever written, and I was hoping for more of the same with "Drood."  Unfortunately for me, "Drood" proved to be one of the most boring books I've ever read. It's nearly 800 pages long, and the blasted thing took me a solid month to read. I almost stopped reading the novel several times during the course of those four weeks, but only kept at it because of a promise I'd made to review it. "The Terror," on the other hand, is nearly a 1,000 pages in length, and I read that in eight days, which pretty much says it all.
  "Drood" deals with the last five years of Charles Dickens' life as told by his one-time friend and collaborator Wilkie Collins, the author of "Moonstone." In 1865, Dickens was in a terrible train accident that left dozens of people dead or injured. As the great English author was helping those still alive, he encountered another passenger named Edwin Drood, who's appearance would be enough to give children nightmares for the rest of their lives.
  While Dickens is attempting to give comfort to other passengers, Drood appears to be sucking the life right out of the others. The actions and strange physical appearance of Drood begins to haunt the author's mind after he returns to London and his life of writing, public readings, his family and mistress, and to his close friends in the literary community.
  In time, Dickens tries to find out more about Drood and eventually discovers that the man is supposedly an outcast from Egypt and lives in the catacombs of underground London. Dickens' trip through the catacombs with his friend, Wilkie Collins, is one of the most suspenseful and terrifying journeys he has ever traveled and it leaves a definite mark on Wilkie's psyche. Still, in many ways, this is only the beginning as Dickens makes contact with Drood and then quickly finds himself bound to this unusual person for the last few years of his life. The rest of the story pretty much deals with Collins and how his relationship with Dickens slowly deteriorates over time and how he, too, becomes a victim of Drood's mesmerizing powers.
  Now, that brief synopsis makes the book sound rather interesting, doesn't it? Yet, the book completely fails to deliver. I will say that the novel does offer a great deal of information on the lives of both Charles Dickens and Wilkie Collins, and there will be some readers who'll enjoy that. In fact, I found the descriptions of 18th-century London and the life of Dickens to be interesting for the first couple of hundred pages, but after passing the halfway mark, the story begins to drag, and I was like a kid being led to the dentist's office every time I had to pick it up. Why? The main reason is that though Edwin Drood is discussed throughout the book, he only makes a short number of actual appearances, covering less than 40 pages of this massive tomb.
  Also, though Drood is the most intriguing and scary character in the story, the tale seems to center around Wilkie Collins and his growing jealousy of Dickens' success. I wanted more of Edwin Drood. After all, the novel is named "Drood," not Wilkie Collins.  Instead, what happens is that the reader gets a series of long dissertations on how Dickens spent the last five years of his life doing public readings in England and America, working on his magazine, arguing with Collins over trivial matters, divorcing his wife, visiting his mistress, complaining about his son-in-law, who happens to be Wilkie's brother, etc., etc., etc. You also have the same experiences being discussed by Wilkie Collins about his own life, but at least they hold your interest for longer periods of time and are occasionally mixed with information about Edwin Drood.
  Simmons is one of the best writers today in the field of horror, and when he writes a descriptive horror scene, it will stay in your mind for weeks to come. He does this with about five scenes in the novel: the train wreck at the beginning, the journey of Dickens and Collins through the underground catacombs, the hunt for Drood in the catacombs by Detective Field and his team of a hundred men, the journey through the top floors of several buildings by Collins and Detective Barris, and when Collins goes up the employee's staircase in his new house and encounters a dangerous ghost. If there had been more scenes such as these in "Drood," the novel would've reached the excellence of "The Terror," because Simmons knows to create atmosphere and dread and danger lurking in the dark shadows. This is when the novel flows with an energy that captures you in its grasp, holding you prisoner until the scene has ended, lost in another world where death is anxiously awaiting only a few feet away. I literally couldn't put the book down during these magnificently written scenes, and "Drood" is one heavy book to hold.
  I should also note that Simmons creates many fabulous characters in "Drood," such as the tough police officer, Hatchery, and private investigators Field and Barris (though Field may be based on an actual individual), plus the student from the train wreck, Edmond Dickerson, who's befriended by the famous writer. There's also King Laazaree, who controls the opium den in the underground part of London; and, of course, the infamous Drood. Still, all of these positives weren't enough to win me over, especially when I finally reached the ending. The final pages of "Drood" leave the reader hanging and not knowing what to believe. Dickens says one thing about Drood, while Collins believes the opposite. At this point, the real question would probably be: Who cares?
  Maybe I was expecting too much from "Drood." I mean two years is a long time to wait for a novel to come out. Still, if I could talk to Simmons (he doesn't respond to e-mails from fans), I wouldn't ask for my money back, but rather the 30 or more hours I spent reading "Drood" and then writing the book review. That's time I'll never get back, and at my age, I don't have a lot of hours left.
  Now, if you want to read a truly horrifying story that will leave you awake at night and shivering beneath the bed covers, I would recommend that you pick up "The Terror" by Simmons. This book shows the author at his absolute best.